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Grammar Blooper Answers and Explanations - page 2

 
10a

Stars, spoons and mouths must all agree in number. If we say "Not all stars were born with silver spoons in their mouths," it could be understood that some people had more than one spoon. For absolute grammatic clarity, make all nouns singular:

"Not every star was born with a silver spoon in his or her mouth."


10b

Again, agreement (singular with singular, plural with plural): clothes are plural, but it is singular.

So either "She enjoys clothes and has fun with them," or "She enjoys fashion and has fun with it."


11a

Idiom: a complement to

11b

Redundancy: "Save $10" or "Get $10 off" but not "Save $10 off"

12a

Idiom: to be nervous about

12b

Idiom: to be crazy about

12c

Idiom: to be excited about

13a

Redundancy: Gifts are free by definition!

13b

Redundancy: "Overhyped" is already too much hype.

14a

Subject/Pronoun Agreement: "Give your wife, mother OR daughter something she will enjoy."

14b

Tricky! Sentence should read " ... and look good doing so" because it refers to the action, not a noun.

15a

each other = 2
one another = 3 or more


15b

each other = 2
one another = 3 or more

16a

It appears from the text in the box that other credit card companies charge transaction fees from American Express. Clarify by omitting reference to American Express:

"Use your Platinum Card abroad without incurring transaction fees that many other cards charge."




 
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